People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents an do there members of society often set a bad example.Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Drugs now days are
commony
under normal conditions
commonly
common
used in developed societies, and there is an indication that young people start to experiment with those allowed and those that are not at a very early
age
. Some sociologist
say
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says
that
familly
a social unit living together
family
and general public set not a good role model for them. The
avaliability
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
availabilities
of the modern times is very
concearning
with regard or relation to
concerning
, as well as the addiction of youngsters
this
days
Suggestion
day
. There should be more discussions in schools about
severity
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the severity
of drug
missuse
apply to a wrong thing or person; apply badly or incorrectly
misuse
as well as more restrictive laws against illegal substances. The drugs in developed societies are becoming a normal standard as the parents teach the children from
young
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a young age
age
that is
ok to take a pill, even when one doesn't have any bigger issue.
For
instance if
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instance, if
one has a little runny nose, it is ok to take a pill. It is
also
realativly
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
easy to get a
hoald
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
hold
head
of different pills, because most of the households have a stash of prescribed drugs. As for the illegal drugs they can
also
be
realatively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
easy to find on the streets. So no wonder children can get
addictied
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
in young
age
. If they
wan't
feel or have a desire for; want strongly
want
to experiment and try they can just open the medicine cabin at home,
this
is why they can get addicted quite at a young
age
. To fight the
problem
of addiction and to lower the
accessability
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
of
drugs there
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drugs, there
should be more
awarnes
having knowledge of
awareness
in schools. Already at
young
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a young age, children
a young age children
age
children should have classes about what
concequences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
the drugs can have on their life.
Morever it
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Moreover, it
Moreover it
should be repeated through all the years of schooling so the children could really see the bigger picture of drug danger.
On the other
hand there
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hand, there
should
also
be a stricter law, and stricter penalties for those selling drugs. If there is a higher penalty for selling drugs probably there would be
also
less drug sellers on the streets. In conclusion, in the now days there is a
problem
of
missusing
apply to a wrong thing or person; apply badly or incorrectly
misusing
missing
drugs with young people, and sociologists see the
problem
with the parents as well as in the open society as they give them a bad example. Drugs are
availabe
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
almost everywhere and there
is
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are
a lot of addicts amongst
young population
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the young population
. The
soulution
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
solutions
to
this
problem
is to put in some new
restirictions
a principle that limits the extent of something
restrictions
restriction
restorations
to
decrese
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
decreases
the amount of drugs on
street
Suggestion
the street
streets
and to start at
early
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an early age
age
to really educate the children about the negative effects drugs can have on their life.

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