The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world resulting in the problems especially in cities. What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed?.

Relocation of people into cities is becoming alarming. Almost worldwide,
aPeople
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a People
are moving
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is moving
from rural to urban areas and
this
has specifically become a problematic
issues
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issue
to
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for
in
cities. These movements are
as a
result
of
high rate
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a high rate
the high rate
of employment and availability of standard schools in the cities and the ways in which it can be resolved will be explained in details in
this
essay. In details, employment and
high standard
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a high standard
of schools are available in the cities compared to
countryside
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the countryside
and these are the reasons why people are leaving rural areas.
Furthermore
, cities
has
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have
alot
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a lot
of infrastructure facilities that are either governmental or non government founded
likewise
schools that are well equipped with adequate and quality amenities.
As a
result
of these, parents
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
their children to
such
schools while
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schools, while
people are employed from rural areas because they are unemployed,
also
since
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for
the companies and organizations in urban areas are short staffed.
For instance
, a research conducted by a renowned
economists
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economist
revealed that cities are overpopulated
as a
result
of people who left rural areas to study and work. People are attracted to a good school and place of work.
However
,
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,
it can be
rectify
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rectified
by building of standardized schools in
countryside
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the countryside
.
In addition
, provision of adequate infrastructural facilities that will provide enough job opportunities for people living in rural settings.
For instance
, an article released on 25 of march 2020 states that
majority
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the majority
of people living in
London
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the London countryside
countryside
hardly relocate because of the adequate facilities and schools built in their town. The rate of movement to cities falls dramatically
as a
result
of adequate amenities.
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In conclusion
, despite the fact that cities
provides
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provide
so many gigantic opportunities.
yet
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Yet
, they are faced with so many challenges because of so many people moving in from the
countryside
due to its benefits.
Although
, these
has resulted
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have resulted
to
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in
problems
such
as overpopulation and inadequate resources but can be
rectify
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rectified
if adequate quality facilities (
such
schools and companies) are built in
countryside
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the countryside
.
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