describe a situation you were not allowed to use your cell phone ?

The mobile
phone
disturb
Suggestion
disturbs
the human life
this
days
Suggestion
day
.As now people
also
can't live without
cell
Suggestion
a cell phone
phone
.
Accept space
.
today
Suggestion
Today
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am going to talk about a situation
were
In or at or to what place
where
cell
phone
not allowed. It
happen
Suggestion
happens
when some relatives come at my home to spend vacation time
.
Accept space
.
My
mom
will
say
express in words
tell
me to go
with
Suggestion
to
the relatives roam at
akshardham
Suggestion
Akshardham
temple
.It is a
sunday
first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians
Sunday
sandy
time so
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time, so
there were very rush of people that day.We
also
enter
in
Suggestion
into
the
temple
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
forget to switch off my
phone
and
then
my relatives told that we want to buy some sweets to
plating
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
in the
temple
,
Accept space
,
we go to the shop and buy sweets, and
then
we enter the gate of
temple
Suggestion
the temple
a temple
temples
,
Accept space
,
and stand
in to
Suggestion
in
into
the
line we
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line, we
seen that the line is
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
big
,
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,
but we start
walk
Suggestion
walking
slow slow
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slow, slow
then
we reach the main gate suddenly my
cellphone
Suggestion
cell phone
starts ringing every people seen me like that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have do
Suggestion
have done
any big crime
,
Accept space
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
put out my
phone
from in the pocket and
then
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do as switch off.It is a time
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am feel
Suggestion
feel
am feeling
shameless
then
we complete our
worship we
Accept comma addition
worship, we
go to the garden and
seat
a group of things of the same kind that belong together and are so used
set
in the garden and eat plating
,
Accept space
,
but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am not on my
phone
after spending two hours we came
outside to
Suggestion
outside the temple
outside to the temple
temple
,
Accept space
,
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
start my
phone
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
seen
Suggestion
have seen
saw
there were four miss
call
Suggestion
the call
of my friend in my
phone
,
Accept space
,
and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
call and ask him why did you call me four times he gave me
reply
Suggestion
a reply
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to ask you where is you
then
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
give
reply
Suggestion
a reply
and cut the
phone
, and we all come back my home.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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