Some people believe that their children should do educational activities during their Free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is a key to success in

this

modern era. A Few individuals assert that youngster

use

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uses

thier

of them or themselves

their

leisure

time

to learn something regarding

their studies but,

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their studies, but

many citizens are totally

disagree

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disagreeing

with

this

because they think that it will increase the

stresses

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stress

leavel

a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality

level

among teenagers. I somehow coincide with the view of spending

time

with education activities.

First

of all, Different person's have their own experience and

opinions but

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opinions, but

according to many studies majority of people's

judgment

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judges

reflect that children should do action related to studies in their mean

time

because it would be helps to gain some knowledge about education. For

intance

an occurrence of something

instance

, parents believe that if their child like to play

game

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games

or puzzle connected to his education. It will give him or

hor

of a female

her

hour

how

to increase their general knowledge and vocabulary.

Also

, these types of puzzle sharp their mind.

On the other hand

, People who think that it will impact

children

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children's

child

child's

mental health by increments of stress.

Also

, Change the behaviour of teenagers. To

examplify

be characteristic of

exemplify

, study's of Canadian universities showed that students who always have pressure with regards of educations are going

in

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during

depression day by day. So, that way many people demand that children should do their favourite excuses or activities in their extra

time

.

Furthermore

, we can say that in recents

time

teenagers

are involving

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are involved

in many criminal cases because they spend their most of free

time

on

internet

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the internet

.

Besides

, Internet have

huge amount

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a huge amount

of

time

after their schools.

For example

, Internet have

planty

a full supply

plenty

of violence game or

movie which

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movie, which

are not allowed

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is not allowed

for juvenile because it has their bad effects on

youths

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youth's

youth

life. That way children have to always do something knowledgeable. On the other side, we have to know that movie, TV shows or game

are

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is

also

important in children's life because it brings happiness and freshness on their faces. To illustrate, it is a undoubtedly that few bad films or games influence

youngsters but

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youngsters, but

we

can not

can not

cannot

ignore many others which

gives

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give

the valuable information and new ideas to students. Tv channels like discovery, Animal Planet or History TV

have

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has

a great image in youth. At the end,

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refers to the speaker or writer

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like to conclude with that each coin has two

side but

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sides, but

sides but

it depends on

individuals how

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individuals, how

they use

this

it for their own benefit. I think so, Activities should be

related

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relate

the children studies have the

significance

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significant

change in

children

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child's

child

life.