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Some people believe that watching television is bad for children. Other people believe that watching television is educational for children. Which opinion do you agree with and why?

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It is thought that enjoying
television
 is an advantage for children by some people,
however
, there is
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 opinion that it is a disadvantage to
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 children. While watching
television
 is a difficulty that enjoyment
tv
 programs trigger to communicate poorly with friends, it is an essential option to learn about
rules
Suggestion
the rules
 of society. There are several opinions of enjoyment
tv
 programs.
First
, according to TBS company’s survey in Japan about
tv
 programs are how much affected to 6 to 10 years old children are compared between A group who are watching
tv
 shows a prolonged period time, and B group who people are not watching
television
 for long time. In fact, there is a wide
deference
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
 that former’s communication ability is
lacked
Suggestion
lacking
.
On the contrary
, their physical strength is less developed than later.
This
 is said as one of
huge problems
Suggestion
the huge problems
 that we have to concern
it
reflexive from of "it"
itself
.
Nevertheless
, watching
tv
 shows are believed by some people that it is a wonderful material in order to educate children through a
tv
, since nowadays
television
 companies create diversity programs, namely learning English and other country’s cultures channels.
In addition
, currently,
tv
 has been developed that children can connect and join to
tv
 shows in real time by SNS.
On
Suggestion
In
 the other words, a kid does not have to feel
loneliness
Suggestion
lonely
 when he or she is at home alone owing to parent job. In conclusion, enjoying
tv
 programs are good way to teach them about making friends and build communication skills, but it is believed that it has several negative effects
to
Suggestion
for
of
 teenagers in their childhood.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • entertainment
  • excessive
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • influence
  • learning opportunities
  • cognitive development
  • language acquisition
  • information overload
  • inappropriate content
  • parental control
  • media literacy
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