Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to lining in as apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared to with living in an apartment? Give reasons for answer with relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there are many options available to live with your family or alone. Some people believe that flats are more convenient than row houses, while others think exactly opposite of
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aspect. As per my point of view both options have similar advantages and disadvantages, and
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essay will discuss both of them with the conclusion at the end. To initiate with, there are some benefits of living in a
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of all, the main reason is the celebration of different festivals. Festivals can be celebrated more joyfully than apartments because everyone can wish other people from their houses, and they never feel alone because all other members of society
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treat everyone like a family. The
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reason is the value of property. A
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with the land is more valuable than a flat, which may
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result
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a higher value
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than it had been bought before. As an instance, as per my personal experience, in my neighbourhood society, people are living for more than fifty years and they never thought about selling their
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because of their peaceful life and bonding with other neighbours. Living in a
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may financially and mentally beneficial for everyone.
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, the disadvantages are
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needed to keep in mind.
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, the main pitfall is the safety of the people and the expensive things. In the
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type of buildings maximum side of the building is widely open, so anyone can enter
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into
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from the short boundary walls and the terrace which may cause
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problems
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and their costly items
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as jewelleries and money. The fear of the safety is minimized in the flats because those consist of only one entrance.
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, heat is another disadvantage for a
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. In hot weather, terrace conserves more heat, and transfers it into the
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, which converts into the hot temperature inside the
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, so it is uncomfortable for each person of the
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. While,
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problem is solved in the flat, because it has more than one storey of the building and people feel colder than a
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. To illustrate, in my city Ahmadabad, there are manifold flats are
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being constructed just
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a few years
, because people found those comfortable and they love to live in the apartments. To conclude, as per my opinion, after discussing all the benefits and drawbacks, it is totally upon the people that where they wanted to live by considering their requirements with comfortable and happy life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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