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What do you think about covid -19 has important effects on our lives.

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A contagious disease is always brought dangerous to people. Especially the diseases which not cured yet. Since the commencement of the COVID-19 outbreak, human life has been affected in both health and economic aspects.
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, COVID-19 is a new respiratory disease and have no vaccines yet, so that people’s health is in danger. In fact,
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 super infectious virus in which parasite on humans is really dangerous, lethal, and contagious. It will attack and weaken the immune system,
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 break into our lungs to cause disease. We can protect ourselves against contagious diseases by washing hands well and often and staying away from those who are sick.
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, by staying at home all the time to prevent the virus, the economy has been stagnating.
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 means that people must stop trading, studying, working and many activities outside to protect health. People are put into a dilemma and must try to maintain their finances in difficult times. The effect on the economy can bring to poverty, crime, and stress. In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has been influencing many aspects of our life, especially the immune system and finances. It’s dramatically hazardous so that we must carefully, and have a new plan to face the virus.
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