The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the expected
sales
of Jeans for two companies called Mango
group and Jack and Jones
company
in next
term in Turkey. Correct article usage
the next
While
the given pie chart provides the
data about their predicted retail stake in the coming Correct article usage
apply
period
.
Overall
, the total sales
of Jack and Jones
group are forecast to increase more than the mango
throughout the period
. At the same time, Jack and Jone's team also
look forward to holding half proportion of the total retail stake in the next
year.
During the next
period
, both companies' sales
awaited to increase sharply. Among them, Jack and Jones
show more sales
than mango
association. Despite some fluctuations, the Jack and Correct article usage
the mango
Jones
sale anticipated growing
sharply from 450,000 Change the verb form
to grow
if
pairs (January) to 900,000 pairs (December). Even though the Correct word choice
apply
mango
company
hope for gradual growth, surprisingly, their sales
predicted
to cross over the Add a missing verb
are predicted
sales
of the other company
with 450000 and 500,000 respectively.
While
the mango
company
looks ahead to hold 2/10th of the total retail proportion 20% compared to Jack and Jones
(with 50%). During the following period
, Other companies
market share is around 30%.Change noun form
company's
companies'
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