Some people think that newspapers are better way to get news. Other people believe that other media is more confortable than newspapers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays a lot of people use newspapers for knowing news, so they regard that newspapers are the most used
thing
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things
to get news, while others think that other media are more easier sources of
informations
a message received and understood
information
. I agree that other media
such
as
internet
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the internet
and telegram are the best way to be aware of
news
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the news
. On the one
hand some
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hand, some
people regularly buy newspapers to reading news,
also
they think that newspapers are the best method to know
news
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the news
. There are several reasons.
First
one is that newspapers are
more confidential source
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the most confidential source
most confidential source
than other media because some telegram channels spread fake messages.
Secondly many
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Secondly, many
people believe that newspapers are more
comfortable especially
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comfortable, especially
cheaper than online media, because some people who use other media face
to
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of
financial problems namely
theur
of them or themselves
their
expenditure is rising significantly
day
by
day
.
Nevertheless there
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Nevertheless, there
are some drawbacks of newspapers.
Initially
, you can find everything which
is you want
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are you wanting
is you want
to know about something in
newspapers
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the newspapers
. That's
reason
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the reason
a reason
that news in newspapers
are
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is
limited,
also
some
informations
a message received and understood
information
are not given fully so a vast number of humans purchase newspapers reluctantly.
Secondly newspapers
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Secondly, newspapers
made by
unquality
lack of equality
inequality
papers, so some newspapers are worthless for using,
consequently
you are not capable of reading news in newspapers everywhere or every
situations
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situation
.
On the other hand
, at
present
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the present day
day
many people prefer to other
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
than newspapers. There are some benefits and comfortable sides of them.
Firstly
and foremost nowadays a lot of people are busy with works, so they can listen to the news on the radio. On top of that you can get news which are you want to know everywhere
by
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from
other media
such
as Internet, Telegram, TV and others.
In
addition you
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addition, you
are able to share these
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
dates
details
with friends.
Lastly nobody
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Lastly, nobody
especially
young
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younger
generations do not buy newspapers at present
day
because all news can be delivered to a person's
smartphones
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smartphone
. T
o conclude despi
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conclude, despite
te the fact that reading news in newspapers might have some advantages, I uphold that using other media like TV, radio, Internet, Facebook are better way t
o
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an
a access news

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