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"Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.'

#people #school #children #homework #teachers #role #education
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Education plays a vital role in everyone's life, there are plethora of
school
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 where students are moulded by the teachers and parents
also
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 give quality education. Few believe that teachers should not give a class
work
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 to students at
home
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. While, others opine that giving
homework
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 is essential for the student's
development
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developers
developer
. I examine both the views and give my perspective in
further
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 paragraphs. Whereas, I agree with the latter view.
Undoubtly
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Undoubtedly
, all are worried about the future generation development.
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, parents oppose to
school
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 activity for their child like giving subject
work
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 at
home
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 or projects, because of that children do not get enough
time
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 to spend on other activities.
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, earlier children when came back to
home
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 after
school
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, they spend quality
time
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 with family and play indoor and outdoor games with their friends and siblings. While, today's
time
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 they hardly get
time
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 to play with their kith and kins or even not get
time
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 to spend with family. Due to the
homework
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 given from
school
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 and they have to finish that
work
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 at any cost. That load of
work
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 on
child's mind
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the child's mind
a child's mind
 make exhaust sometime and do not focus properly of subjects, because they even not sleep well in order to complete the projects. That does not only affect mentally, but
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 physically.
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, doing
homework
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 and projects make children more active
in particular
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 subjects as well as gain more knowledge.
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 of all, by doing
work
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 at
home
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 prepare them in advance for the examination and
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 it is true that the
work
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 which done by our own is hardly forgettable.
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, my neighbour child is so intelligent and he has always done his
work
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 by themselves. Another reason, the revision of the
work
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 makes them prepare for coming exam or else they develop mentally. Gaining knowledge helps them in future career and capable to compete with others. In conclusion, I personally believe that doing
homework
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 is important for the children in
school
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 that help them be conscious.
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, outdoor activities
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also plays
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also play
 crucial role in the physical development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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