You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was servd for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say what the participants liked about the hotel •explain why they were unhappy about the food •suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
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Dear Sir/Madam
My name is
khashayar
Partovi. I have booked your Change the capitalization
Khashayar
hotel
for our meeting which was held from Monday to Thursday last
week. I am writing this
letter regarding to
our Remove the preposition
apply
participants
feedback about your services
Change to a genitive case
participant's
participants'
To begin
with, our guests were extremely grateful for your hospitality and services offered to them. Moreover
, they were happy for the hotel
because it was located in a cosy location in
downtown. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the building has an easily
access to public transportation including Change the adverb
easy
subway
.
Add an article
the subway
Although
the participants were satisfied about
the Change the preposition
with
hotel
, However
, the food served Fix capitalization
however
for
them Change preposition
to
make
them annoyed. The Wrong verb form
made
hotel
served a variety of foods but it was not well cooked and when it deliver
to our guests in the restaurant it was cold and inappropriate to eat. Change the form of the verb
delivered
Therefore
, our guests were unhappy with the food.
I am asking you to change your chef and cooking team and replace them with a new cooking team. Furthermore
, I recommend that the waiter or waitress deliver the foods
to the customers as soon as it is cooked and Fix the agreement mistake
food
well warmed
.
Thank you for your reconsideration in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Khashayar PartoviAdd a hyphen
well-warmed
Submitted by khashayarpartovi on
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structure
Ensure the letter is structured appropriately with clear paragraphs for different ideas. A separate paragraph for the closure could enhance clarity.
accuracy
It's good practice to re-read the letter to catch typos and grammatical errors, as these can impede understanding and reduce the overall coherence.
practicality
When making suggestions for improvement, try to be specific but realistic; replacing an entire cooking team may not be practical. Offering suggestions like regular quality checks or training in food presentation could be more effective.
tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout your letter. While addressing issues, also ensure politeness and professionalism. This keeps the letter respectful and constructive.