Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that competition should be encouraged in children, others think the sense of cooperation should be taught. I personally believe that both of them are necessary for children to some extent, but learning about collaboration is more important. Individuals who are supporters of encouraging young ones to compete with each other say that it can improve their overall performance. When there is a rivalry, children may have enough motivation to learn and practice harder;

then

overall, it can raise the level of their skills.

For example

, in sport, as a race is held, children try to practice more to be the champion so their qualifications enhance. If there was no sport match, maybe nobody would have enough motivation to exercise. It is admitted that competition has some advantages and to some extent it should be existed among children,

however improving the

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however, improving the

sense of collaboration is more vital. It is common that taking part in a race gives a kind of negative feeling to children toward their mates which can be detrimental for their mental health.

Moreover

, teaching children about team working is beneficial for their future career. To cite an example, when children cooperate in a

school’s

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school

project to make

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project, making

project making

a handcraft, they will find that how collaboration can be productive;

this

is a skill that they will need in the future in work places.

In addition

, experts believe that cooperation gives a positive sense of productivity and friendship to children. To sum up,

although

competition in children might be useful in some aspects, teaching them cooperation should be valued more.