Despite the environment concerned raised by scientists, people are not changing thier lifestyle. Why is this the cause? What could be done to encourage the people to save the environment.

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Nowadays the environment still suffering from the human exploitation,
although
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there's a visible evidences of destruction and some people are raising concerned and yet still society are carrying on with their ways with no regards
with
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to
the environment.
This
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essay will examine the cause of the problem and suggest
solution
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solutions
a solution
so that people will learn to care for the earth. There are two factors why society
do not want
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does not want
changes,
first
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is laziness because they are too busy with what is convenient for them,
for example
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,
instead
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of taking the train to travel, they
use
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their cars in which carbon emissions
contributes
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contribute
greatly to air pollution
,
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,
moreover
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, garbage segregation, they should learn
on
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about
how to
segragate
separate by race or religion; practice a policy of racial segregation
segregate
biodegradable and non biodegradable and throw in a proper
waste
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Waste
bin.
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Second factor
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The second factor
A second factor
is a lack of awareness,
for instance
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, farmers in the rural area
use
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more fertilizers and pesticides in which is the one leading cause of water contamination
thru
from beginning to end
through
prolong
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prolonged
prolonging
usage. Tackling these issues, the government should pass a mandatory and
strickly
restricted to something
strictly
implement law on reducing private cars on the public roads, penalty on people who throws garbage anywhere and properly
segragated
separated or isolated from others or a main group
segregated
waste, reduce the
use
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of plastics materials and recommended a greener ways to recycle,
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, more outreach program
thru
from beginning to end
through
the
use
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of social media and local governments to explain the effect of toxic products they
use
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,
such
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projects could
also
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educate them. In conclusion, unless effort
are made
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is made
to
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for
people to follow rules and shift the public consciousness,
this
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problem will only
escalates
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escalate
, while government
have
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has
the essential role to play, individuals and business establishment too need to take responsibility for their
eir
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habits and change
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
ways to lessen and avoid more pollution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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