Despite the environment concerned raised by scientists, people are not changing thier lifestyle. Why is this the cause? What could be done to encourage the people to save the environment.

#environment #scientists #people #thier #lifestyle

Nowadays the environment still suffering from the human exploitation,

although

there's a visible evidences of destruction and some people are raising concerned and yet still society are carrying on with their ways with no regards

with

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the environment.

This

essay will examine the cause of the problem and suggest

solution

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solutions

a solution

so that people will learn to care for the earth. There are two factors why society

do not want

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does not want

changes,

first

is laziness because they are too busy with what is convenient for them,

for example

instead

of taking the train to travel, they

use

their cars in which carbon emissions

contributes

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contribute

greatly to air pollution

Accept space

moreover

, garbage segregation, they should learn

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about

how to

segragate

separate by race or religion; practice a policy of racial segregation

segregate

biodegradable and non biodegradable and throw in a proper

waste

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Waste

bin.

Second factor

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The second factor

A second factor

is a lack of awareness,

for instance

, farmers in the rural area

use

more fertilizers and pesticides in which is the one leading cause of water contamination

thru

from beginning to end

through

prolong

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prolonged

prolonging

usage. Tackling these issues, the government should pass a mandatory and

strickly

restricted to something

strictly

implement law on reducing private cars on the public roads, penalty on people who throws garbage anywhere and properly

segragated

separated or isolated from others or a main group

segregated

waste, reduce the

use

of plastics materials and recommended a greener ways to recycle,

furthermore

, more outreach program

thru

from beginning to end

through

the

use

of social media and local governments to explain the effect of toxic products they

use

such

projects could

also

educate them. In conclusion, unless effort

are made

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is made

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for

people to follow rules and shift the public consciousness,

this

problem will only

escalates

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escalate

, while government

have

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has

the essential role to play, individuals and business establishment too need to take responsibility for their

eir

habits and change

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

ways to lessen and avoid more pollution.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

283 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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