Many people now undertake extreme activities. Why do people risk their lives in this way and do you think it's a good trend?

Public opinion has always been divided on the subject of people who engage in extreme sports. Hobbies like skydiving, skiing, downhill, hand-gliding, mountain climbing and many others may be harmful. Why do people risk their lives for their hobbies. I will try to figure out my essay. Let’s start with the most important thing -
this
thing is adrenaline. It seems to me that the desire to experience
adrenaline
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the adrenaline
in your veins moves people very much. People since olden times loved to play with death.
Nevertheless
, used to be gladiators and people who dive right to sharks and now they are paratroopers and hang-gliders. As far as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
’m
concerned I
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concerned, I
have been doing free-ride for 10 years. Free-ride - is extreme skiing.
Consequently
, I
be
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am
able to confidently say that I am
also
involved in
this
matter. When I go down the mountain
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
don’t think about my material problems, about personal relationships and other things that haunt most people throughout life. At
this
moment in my head there are only three things: mountain, skiing and descent, and I’ll tell you that
this
is a real buzz. Just like me, people who engage in extreme activities have
this
feeling. I believe, that jumping,
for example
, with a parachute at least once in their life. People feel free and happy at these moments on
this
and risk their lives. All in all, I can confidently say that I support extreme sports.
Also
, I believe that
this
risk is justified and I advise people not to be afraid and discover something new.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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