The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia at present and in the future.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia at present and in the future.
The diagrams below are showing the difference between the present
water
supply system in Australia, and what the system will look like in the future.
In the
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first picture, it shows that pure
water
from the dam or storage is transferred to the
city
, where it is used in shops, factories and households. And from the
city
,
storm
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water
follows the pipes to the river,
meanwhile
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the waste
water
is taken to the
water
treatment plant, where it is processed. As we can see in the
second
picture, which demonstrates how the
water
system works in the future, the pure
water
storage in the dam and
the
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usage of it in the
city
stays the same.
However
, unlike now,
storm
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water
is directed to the treatment plant, where they recycle the
water
and the
water
flows back into the
city
for reuse, and no waste
water
will be released into the river.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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