Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. SOme people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that it’s a kind of wasting of money to invest on
space
researches and Use synonyms
exploration
or on making Use synonyms
space
probes or telescopes. They justify their opinion that there are many unsolved problems on Earth that are preferable to Use synonyms
space
Use synonyms
exploration
, like climate change, pollution, poverty and... . These are vital problems and concerns for a person who is living on Earth in Use synonyms
this
century, Linking Words
for
Linking Words
example when
there are lots of people who can’t even find enough food or a suitable place to sleep, they find it useless to spend millions of dollars for Accept comma addition
example, when
space
Use synonyms
exploration
, and they are right. In each country, priorities are different and government should prioritize their decisions. But if we think deeper and be more aware of the future of our planet we will find Use synonyms
space
Use synonyms
exploration
as important as solving human problems, because it is being done for the Use synonyms
next
generations.
I agree with spending money on Linking Words
space
Use synonyms
exploration
for some reasons, even though Use synonyms
universe
is a violent place! Suggestion
the universe
Earth
is under enormous threats from so many areas. Suggestion
The earth
First
universe is full of galaxies which Linking Words
contains
lots of stars, asteroids, comets and meteorites which are wandering in Suggestion
contain
space
. As we Use synonyms
know
millions years ago one meteorite hit the earth and caused Suggestion
knew
dinosaur’s
Suggestion
dinosaur
extinction which
can happen again and be the reason of our extinction. By researching and learning about them, we can protect Earth and life from them. Accept comma addition
extinction, which
it’s
not science fiction, Suggestion
It’s
its
guaranteed by it is
it's
physics
laws. Suggestion
physical
Second
, as the population is growing, Earth will be smaller for us. Linking Words
Also
the amount of available food will be declined, so we will need another planet to live or provide food. Linking Words
Third
, we, humans, are causing global warming. By increasing the number of industries which use fossil fuels and produce greenhouse gases, Linking Words
Earth’s temperature
is rising. High temperature can melt Antarctic’s and Arctic’s Suggestion
the Earth’s temperature
ice which
can make the temperature higher, it Accept comma addition
ice, which
also
kills Amazon jungle and other forests which eliminate carbon dioxide from Linking Words
atmosphere
. Suggestion
the atmosphere
This
case can destroy Earth and make it a dangerous place to live, at Linking Words
this
time we have to leave Earth to Linking Words
another
planets.
In conclusion, both not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
space
exploring and living standards are equal to spend money and Use synonyms
government
should counterbalance between investing Suggestion
the government
on
Suggestion
in
space
Use synonyms
exploration
and increasing the living standards on Earth, because both are necessary for increasing the quality of human’s life, one of them is for their current life and one of them is for their future
.Use synonyms
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