Write a letter to your friend who has asked you about a short course, which you have done. Write about the content of the course. The future benefit of the course.
Part of society would argue that businesses should influence 55+ individuals in senior
positions
to retire in order to increase opportunities to
the youngsters. Personally, I Change preposition
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compeltely
disagree with Correct your spelling
completely
this
positions
due to the following reasons.
To begin
with, experienced employees
are more profitable to companies, since they rarely have extra costs such
as training and maternity leave, consequently
improving entrepreneurs income that may result in more jobs to
the young generation. Change preposition
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For instance
, studies have shown that female workers under 30 costs
3 x more than an older one, regarding the extra costs. Change the verb form
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Additionally
, older staff are ideal mentors to the young, as their experience in the field might help them to avoid mistakes not taught in books, as a result
, these new employees
could achieve high professional performances faster tha
if they were by themselves.
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than
Furthermore
, young employees
tend to be less trsutful
in senior Correct your spelling
trustful
positions
, because they commonly change jobs, therefore
employees
could lose the whole investment made preparing them. To illustrate this
trend, 8 of 10 workers under-35 have changed their work at least once in two years, letting their bosses down. Moreover
, the learning process of roles requires working in diverse positions
not only senior ones, thanks to the fact that high-çevel positions
need a general vision of the company, as a consequence, the young should
work in every role to be competent to take a higher position.
In conclusion, Add the word(s)
but the young should also
although
it is believed that olders
should retire sooner, I do believe that they are more valuable working, regarding financial benefits as well as educational advantages.Correct your spelling
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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