Some believe that history has little to teach us about today while others think that the study of the past helps us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

History has always a great impacts on
humans
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human
human's
life because it helps people
to gain
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gain
some knowledge from their ancestors and,
also
give the information about some great inventions, but some individuals deny the
this
fact. According to my opinion, History has lots of important and valuable items to teach us about the modern life. Both views are discussed in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
Firstly Many
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Firstly, Many
studios
a detailed critical inspection
studies
showed that most of the modern era investors based on past history of great
scientits
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scientist's
scientists
scientists'
scientist
ideas.
For example
, the creation of the electricity found by Nickols Tesla in late century's, which help people in many ways because electricity plays important role in every
persons
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person's
life. History is the mother of every innovation,
also
we can deny the
fect
a piece of information about circumstances that exist or events that have occurred
fact
facts
of history. In the point view of automobiles industries, I like to talk about cars because many
car
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cars
we use in today's time are connected to past time because the
first
car was built by a
germen
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Germany or its people or language
German
engineer in
18th century
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the 18th century
. To illustrate, Today's the major transport and car companies make their vehicles based on past theories like, Car or
motercycle
a motor vehicle with two wheels and a strong frame
motorcycle
shapsand
having the point made sharp
sharpened
sizes.
On the other hand
, we can ignore the other point of view because they are
also
right. We should more focus on
present
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present, then
presents then
presents presents then
then
past because we have more opportunities and options nowadays.
For instance
, As compare to past time the education level is really
huge change
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a huge change
because we have
better system
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a better system
better systems
and research methods know,
Also
we have advantages of computers and internet. To sum up, I will like to conclude that each coin has two
side
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sides
, it depends on individuals how the use it for their own benefit. But, we should never forget our history.

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  • valuable lessons
  • insights
  • root causes
  • current problems
  • past mistakes
  • repeating
  • generations
  • informed decisions
  • irrelevant
  • unique
  • contemporary solutions
  • technological advancements
  • thorough understanding
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