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Some people think that e-book are the death of the paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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The people ask whether the electronic textbook displaces the paper text or not In foreseeable future.
This
 question divided people into campuses. The proponent, saying that electronic books will be dominant, believe that the people will change completely into an electronic library for several reasons.
On the other hand
, the opponents of
this
 vision refuse to acknowledge
this
 claim for several aspects.
Firstly
, the supportive side, saying the manufacture of traditional text will die, argues that digital books have several advantages.
Firstly
, it's apparent that the world becomes increasingly depend on technology.
This
 reason shows why a lot of public libraries, convert into a virtual world.
For example
, a lot of libraries had already built their website. These websites help scholars wanting to these libraries. If these scholars use the electronic engine for books, they will search in billion sources in a moment.
As a result
, the libraries' customers tend sharply to use these types of research rather than spend their time among the bookshelves. That led several libraries to close their doors and converted their source in digital formats
such
 as PDF.
On the other hand
, there is another vision says that even though the internet changes the classical idea of a public library, the tradition will still survive for several reasons. Begin with, conversion textbook into the electronic form required any chemical agents, and these agents sometimes may lead to delete some date.
For example
, the librarians avoid to scan some holy religious books because
this
 process may lead to erase some information. In conclusion, even though the PDF books is preferred by a majority of scholars because it is more comfortable, not meaning it will displace completely the traditional type of book because they have scarce information.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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