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Some people think that government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help them find jobs. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Every country has a significant problem in society like unemployment. It is one of
consequences
Suggestion
the consequences
 of globalization. In
this
 case some people have an opinion that
government
 can solve
this
 problem if employed people have cell phone and free
internet
 connection.
As a result
, they have much more opportunities and chances to find a
job
. Personally, I agree with
this
 statement. Due to the fact, that
this
 small action can help to
solution
Suggestion
solve
 many social, economical and psychological problems, which I will explain in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, it is well known,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
 we live in
technological age
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a technological age
the technological age
. What I mean here is that nowadays all news,
job
 opportunities we can find in
internet
. Early people looked forward for
job
 in papers or in
advertisement
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an advertisement
advertisements
.
However
, in
contemporary world it
Suggestion
the contemporary world, it
the contemporary world it
 is old trend. Many companies search
labors
assign a label to; designate with a label
labels
 in different apps and
internet
 web sites like
job
Suggestion
the job
.
com
Suggestion
Com
 or hh.
com
Suggestion
Com
 (head hunter.
com
Suggestion
Com
), which offer many
job
 vacancies for different specializations.
Secondly
, when jobless have
opportunity
Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
 to find a
job
 with mobile phone and available
internet
,
then
 it will solve different social problem. Because, according world
research more
Accept comma addition
research, more
 people divorced, take drugs and become
alcohol addiction cause
Suggestion
an alcohol addiction cause
the alcohol addiction cause
 lose the
job
.
On the other hand
, it can
also
 be argued that
government
 should not provide the jobless people with technology services.
Instead
,
government
 can use
this
 money for
education new
Accept comma addition
education, new
profession
Suggestion
professionals
 for unemployed people and organize new vacancies.
This
 method will be more effective and productive as for jobless people so for
government
 and country. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis, we can say that it is a good idea to find a little issue against unemployment and when jobless people will use
this
 in
right way
Suggestion
the right way
a right way
 than countries economy and citizen’s life will be much better.
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