The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the volume of waste materials produced by the three different companies from 2000 to 2015.
The maximum volume of debris was generated by
company
A, although
the production was dropping from approximately 12 tonnes
to 8 tonnes
within 15 years.
With regards to Company
C, initially
, it has the least amount of junk production and then
it steadily increased from nearly 3 tonnes
to 6 tonnes
within 5 years. After that, it grew up slightly till 2010 and increased dramatically to reach a peak of almost 10 tonnes
in 2015 which was the highest of all.
Company
B, which
was moderately maintaining the waste produced, Correct pronoun usage
apply
although
eventually, it has shown the least among all others particularly
in a waste-producing. From 2005 to 2010, it was tapering off by approximately 5 Add the comma(s)
,particularly
tonnes
.
Overall
, although
company
A was producing a substantial amount of waste, it failed to produce a large quantity at the end
and which was followed by company
B and
as opposed to Correct word choice
apply
company
C
timeline.Change noun form
C's
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