The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the volume of waste materials produced by the three different companies from 2000 to 2015. The maximum volume of debris was generated by
company
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A,
although
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the production was dropping from approximately 12
tonnes
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to 8
tonnes
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within 15 years. With regards to
Company
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C,
initially
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, it has the least amount of junk production and
then
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it steadily increased from nearly 3
tonnes
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to 6
tonnes
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within 5 years. After that, it grew up slightly till 2010 and increased dramatically to reach a peak of almost 10
tonnes
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in 2015 which was the highest of all.
Company
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B,
which
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apply
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was moderately maintaining the waste produced,
although
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eventually, it has shown the least among all others
particularly
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,particularly
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in a waste-producing. From 2005 to 2010, it was tapering off by approximately 5
tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
although
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company
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A was producing a substantial amount of waste, it failed to produce a large quantity
at the end
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and which was followed by
company
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B
and
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as opposed to
company
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C
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C's
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timeline.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words company, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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