What are the causes and effects of global warming and deforestation to the world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the modern
world
, environmental
problems including
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problems, including
air pollution and acid rain seem to be
a
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A
major issue among every
countries
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country
. Some group of people claims that environmental problem which we face at the moment is affected
from
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by
global warming while others consider that cutting down a
tree
cause a lot of environmental problems which is badly impact to our
world
.
This
essay will discuss the effect of both climate change and deforestation to the environment and provide some of my opinions to support. Nowadays, there are a lot of factors which cause environmental problem
by
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of
global warming.
Firstly
, burning fossil seem to be a main reason of causing global warming problem because cars are powered by gasoline and diesel. So, cars will release a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. After that, the temperature of the whole
world
will increase slightly because the ozone level would be destroyed.
Secondly
, Industry and factory are another factor of climate change.
This
kind of place will produce a vast amount of
methane which
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methane, which
is 23 times more potent than carbon dioxide. The level of ozone will be in the trouble and
this
kind of greenhouse gas will destroy human life in the future.
On the other hand
, deforestation seem to be a main reason of every environmental
problems
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problem
. Trees produce an enormous amount of oxygen and absorb carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas. Nowadays, the percentages of green land in the
world
is decreasing
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are decreasing
quickly over ten years because some group of people
cut
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cuts
down to
tree
make an effort or attempt
try
to do a business including selling and
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
. If these
group
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groups
of people still cut down a
tree
, the temperature in the future will be touching 45 degree which might cause extinct some
spices
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
of animal. To sum up,
this
essay discussed how global warming and deforestation affect to the
world
. From my perspective, every environmental
problems
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problem
could be completely
tackle
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tackled
, if people stop cutting down a
tree
and using less of burning fuel.
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