Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

#animals #drugs #procedures

In the present, a million of animals including monkeys and rats are suffering and death

as a result

scientist

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scientific

research and experiment. Some groups of

people especially

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people, especially

scientist claim that animal testing is necessary to cure a patient, others say we should find another solution

instead

of animal testing.

This

essay will look through at some of the positive and negative effect of

animals

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animal

testing and provide some of my opinions. Since animals are similar to people

such

as blood system and heart system, a group of

scientist

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scientists

use

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uses

animals to

test

the safety and effectiveness of newly

medicine

before testing with a small group of patients. If the newly drug is

productive and non danger

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a productive and non danger

to life, a hundred of animals could survive and live on.

On the other hand

, if the newly

medicine

could harm to life, the small group of

this

animals

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animal

have

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has

to suffer and die from

this

process. Without testing animals, new drug would be extremely unsafe.

However

, many

people

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peoples

concern

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concerns

that animals are suffering unnecessarily. They do not believe that every new drugs need to

test

with animals. There are a lot of reasons why animals should not be used to

test

Firstly

, humans and animals don’t always react in the same way to a drug. The reason that some

medicine

react

into

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a good way with animals while it

fail

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fails

in human.

Secondly

, some

experiment including

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experiment, including

cleaning product and soap do not need to

test

with

animal

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animals

an animal

because it is non-essential product. To sum up,

this

essay

discuss

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discusses

both sides of

advantages

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the advantages

and disadvantages of

animals

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animal

testing. From my perspective, newly

medicine

could not

avoidable

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avoid

present but

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present, but

cleaning product and soap should be

stop

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stopped

stopping

test

with animals.

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There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you hope will be done about it.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources. Others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?