Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

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In the present, a million of animals including monkeys and rats are suffering and death

as a result

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scientist

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scientific

research and experiment. Some groups of

people especially

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people, especially

scientist claim that animal testing is necessary to cure a patient, others say we should find another solution

instead

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of animal testing.

This

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essay will look through at some of the positive and negative effect of

animals

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animal

testing and provide some of my opinions. Since animals are similar to people

such

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as blood system and heart system, a group of

scientist

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scientists

use

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uses

animals to

test

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the safety and effectiveness of newly

medicine

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before testing with a small group of patients. If the newly drug is

productive and non danger

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a productive and non danger

to life, a hundred of animals could survive and live on.

On the other hand

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, if the newly

medicine

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could harm to life, the small group of

this

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animals

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animal

have

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has

to suffer and die from

this

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process. Without testing animals, new drug would be extremely unsafe.

However

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, many

people

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peoples

concern

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concerns

that animals are suffering unnecessarily. They do not believe that every new drugs need to

test

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with animals. There are a lot of reasons why animals should not be used to

test

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Firstly

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, humans and animals don’t always react in the same way to a drug. The reason that some

medicine

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react

into

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a good way with animals while it

fail

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fails

in human.

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, some

experiment including

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experiment, including

cleaning product and soap do not need to

test

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with

animal

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animals

an animal

because it is non-essential product. To sum up,

this

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essay

discuss

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discusses

both sides of

advantages

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the advantages

and disadvantages of

animals

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animal

testing. From my perspective, newly

medicine

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could not

avoidable

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avoid

present but

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present, but

cleaning product and soap should be

stop

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stopped

stopping

test

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with animals.

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Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?

Your opinion

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Artists need an certain amounts of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should gave total freedom to express any thought and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why this is the case? What can be done about this problem?