Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents. How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents? In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems?

Generation gap
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The generation gap
between young people and elderly
generation including
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generation, including
their parents and baby
boomer
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Boomer
has become wider
as a result
of differences attitudes and ideas. Nowadays, lacking of understanding in
family
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the family
has spread into every
countries
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country
so spreading time together to do
a
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an
activity
such
as watching television and having a chat among family is decreasing significantly.
This
essay will discuss what are the differences between these two generations and what problems might be caused.
First
of all, advancement in technology has lead to a
generation
gap in
this
modern world which is a main reason of
this
problem. Children tend to spend most of their leisure time with
this
technology
devices including
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devices, including
computer and mobile phone so
child
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the child
children
would not discuss any problems with their parents and grandparents.
On the other hand
, elderly people when they have problems would discuss and consult with someone who has more experience. Another difference that we could see clearly is the view on work.
young
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
Young
people would like to be
owner
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owned
business while most of elderly people thought
that being employee
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that being an employee
that being employed
that being employed employed
has more secure in term of income and
stable
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stability
.
Thus
, when these two
group
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groups
of people have a discussion about work, they all are totally different view on work. All of the differences idea and attitudes between young people and their parents have caused a lot of problems.
Firstly
, children
start
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starts
to not obey their parents and ignore their value time with family.
Secondly
, a lack of having a chat in family cause a stress level and stressful is the root of many health problems. To sum up,
this
essay
discuss
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discusses
what are the
differences ideas and
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differences in ideas and
attitudes between young and old people and what
problem
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problems
the problem
may be caused
from
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by
the difference. From my perspective,
this
problem should be solved by listening
for
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to
each other so a
generation
gap would become smaller.
young
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
Young
generation
should
listen their parents
Suggestion
listen to their parents
and their parents
also
have to accept what generations like, want and need.
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