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In recent years, life has become more stressful than it has ever been. As a consequence, more and more people are suffering from stress-related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase and what do you think can be done to overcome the current problem.

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With the advent of globalization and augment in overall competition to live
luxurious
Suggestion
a luxurious life
luxurious lives
the luxurious life
life
, there have been accompanying issues with raising a level of stressful
life
. Over the past century, man’s quest for material possession and
rat race
Suggestion
the rat race
 for success have led to a
life
 full of
stress
.
Stress
 has become part and parcel of our lives. These days, even young children lead a stressful
life
. Increasing competition is the number one cause of
stress
. Everybody wants to achieve more and more. They want to do better than their peers and
that is
 why people are not happy with what they have.
This
 perpetual struggle to do better than one’s peers leads to
stress
 and cause many health
problem
Suggestion
problems
. The modern society glorifies
workaholism
. Employees are forced to burn the midnight oil to meet crazy deadlines. Cut throat competition exists in
job market
Suggestion
the job market
 would not allow people to spare
time
 for their families or for themselves.
Further
, social media
also plays
Suggestion
also play
 a vital role in causing
stress
. People post exotic image of their holidays and rant about their expensive acquisitions on social media.
This
 makes their friends feel inadequate. Perhaps the biggest problem that plagues our world is
pursuit
Suggestion
the pursuit
 of material gains. We equate happiness with cars, villas and foreign vacations. After providing a careful analysis of why
stress
 has risen so sharply in these countries, I shall a number of ways in which the
stress
 epidemic can be ameliorated. In my opinion, the only way to beat
stress
 is to look for meaning in
life
.
Instead
 of rushing after material gains, we should look inward and connect with our true nature.
Further
, problems related to
stress
 can be curtailed to a large extent by balancing the work and leisure
time
. Everyone should spare some free
time
 to participate in activities that meant to relieve
stress
 and rejuvenate mind. To put in
nutshell
Suggestion
a nutshell
,
stress
 is inevitable in today’s
life
. We have got only one
life
 and if we let the modern world intricacies eat it up, we would be the greatest fool in the history. We need to be happy with little and lead quality
time
 with family to fight the
stress
 related issues.

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