Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
In recent times,
as a result
of constant media attention and huge salaries have sparked heated debates about whether sports professionals deserve such
huge income comparing to other important professions such
as top surgeons, scientists or political leaders who have responsibilities of governing the whole country
.
On one hand, some people believe that sports professionals who earn a great deal of money
are the hard
workers in their respective field. There are manifold reasons for Suggestion
the hardest
such
beliefs. Firstly
, people often have this
opinion argued that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money
is recognition of the audacity and hardworking nature of an athlete, who relishes with the victory. Secondly
, competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. Thirdly
, the pressure from media
is intense and there is little privacy out of Suggestion
the media
spotlight
. Suggestion
the spotlight
Last
but not least, there is a huge number of sport persons compared to those who have become successful and having huge salary. It takes lots of practice, skills and time to become
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become
sport icon
.
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a sport icon
Furthermore
, entertainment plays an essential role in our every day’s
life. We all need to relax, watching TV with our favourite TV stars or favourite football players. Entertainment is one of the best ways to eliminate stress and tension and leave all troubles behind. Suggestion
day
For Instance
, I cannot stay home all day
long without watching TV. So, basically, I believe that famous athletes and entertainers have such
high salaries because we need them. They like doctors for our minds and soles. Scientists say that people usually spend the same amount of money
for their food and entertainment. I think this
fact tells a lot. Seen in this
light, it is clearly unfounded to claim that a great deal of money
sport professionals received is not justified and fair.
On the other hand
, it is also
believed that various professions such
as engineers, doctors etc
, who contribute to making Accept comma addition
doctors, etc.
doctors etc.
world
run smoothly, are getting less salary than sports professionals. Doctors put at least ten years Suggestion
the world
to
study and training, their work to save Suggestion
of
life
. Engineer studied around 8 years and make number equipment which is used in Suggestion
lives
day
to day
life and invent new products every day
. Teachers educate and inspire young people to be a responsible citizen. It is also
argued that if these professionals don’t get more in our country
than they decide to migrate to developed country
. As a result
, our developing country
face lots of problems. It is undeniable that as they are running our country
, they deserve to get same salary
as sportsmen.
After having discussed the most pertinent points of the issue, I, personally, advocate the Suggestion
the same salary
later
view and agree with a notion that the sports professionals with suffice tendency to accomplish something in their career are justified to acquire huge earnings. It clearly depicts that, referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
sports professions
Accept comma addition
sports, professions
has
more value than other essential professions around the world.Suggestion
have
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