Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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lobal trend
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a global trend
to go to different countries during people’s vacations. While some groups of personal say that in order to give opportunity for c
ommon citizen,
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the common citizen
common citizens
aircraft ticket price should provide more low pay to people, I personally maintain that it has caused a lot of natural i
ssue
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issues
so a
irplane
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cost should be charged to high budget. On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people think about cheap
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travels offer people to enjoy v
acation
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a vacation
in n
eighborhood
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neighbouring
neighbourhood
nations.
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, they can learn more certain culture in d
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different countries
a different country
country
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.
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, if people who never went to China have not u
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understood
China restaurant etiquette, they just know through TW show or Drama which have limited situation and part of c
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the culture
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, as far as long term concerned, it will develop economic about
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ravel industry
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the travel industry
in p
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poor countries
a poor country
country
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.
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mean is that
third
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country
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such
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as Vietnam, Malaysia and other Southeast Asia. They have r
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the rich great
of water activity sources, if
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nations attract many tourists from others countries, they must grow economically conditions.
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, I am firmly of the opinion that it need to restrict aircraft fee more high. Nowadays it is not difficult to hear about how s
erious environment issue
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a serious environmental issue
serious environmental issue
all around w
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the world
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ncreasing number
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An increasing number
of people h
as being used
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have been used
has been used
to plane with a verity number of fossil fuels. It r
esult
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results
has resulted
that many wild animals and plants get harmful effect t
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of
air
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pollution. So if government takes m
easure
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measures
into
air
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travel
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to pay high-priced using s
ite
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a site
the site
of p
lane.
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the plane
Another point worth mentioning is that many younger g
eneration
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generations
s
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should learn
convinced that they
travel
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their
country
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is more meaningful not only protect natural with E
arth but
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Earth, but
also
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educated more
country
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history of each region beautiful tourist attraction. In conclusion, there have several advanced e
ffect
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effects
on cheaper charged to
air
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travel
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for p
eople but
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people, but
natural I a
m personally think
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personally think
am personally thinking
personally thinks
that it is more important to protect our natural all over the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratic travel
  • Global diversity
  • Economic benefits
  • Service sector
  • Educational travel
  • International relationships
  • Carbon emissions
  • Global warming
  • Climate crisis
  • Overtourism
  • Infrastructure
  • Cultural heritage
  • Sustainable aviation
  • Carbon offset
  • Global inequality
  • Airline industry
  • Economic downturn
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