Euthanasia, or mercy killing, has been in the news more and more recently. Many people are strongly against such a practice, but there is a growing demand to have it legalized. How far do you agree with euthanasia being legal?

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A practice of killing a victim of i
ncurable disease
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an incurable disease
mercifully is referred to as
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. Over the
last
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century, a growing number of terminally ill patients have sparked heated debates about whether
mercy
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killing is a good notion f
or
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of
such
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patients to get rid of excruciating pain. On one hand, it can be g
reat relief
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a great relief
from pain and suffering to the patients and even their families by implementing a
dequate methodology
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an adequate methodology
for
mercy
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killing practice. Undoubtedly, losing someone is g
reat loss
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a great loss
which cannot be c
ompensated but
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compensated, but
seeing someone daily in miserable and helpless condition might lead to depression.
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, being practical, spending huge amount of financial resources in patient who does not have any hope of recovering is
also
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a waste of time and money. It may sound un-humanitarian a
ct but
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act, but
there are many cases in our society where families lose all their fortune in order to prolong the
life
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of p
atient
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a patient
the patient
who is staying in c
oma
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a coma
for many months. In fact, money wasted for
this
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purpose can be used for treating other patients who can be brought back to normal
life
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. So someone must think in p
ragmatic way
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a pragmatic way
and legalize
euthanasia
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.
On the other hand
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, many people are terrified w
ith
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by
the concept of
mercy
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killing because of its dreadful act. They relate
euthanasia
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with suicidal cases and
also
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fear f
or
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of
the wrong practice of it thereby oppose its legalization.
For instance
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, a negligence of d
octor
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a doctor
doctors
in any case might be turned into
euthanasia
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case, if there are some loopholes in it.
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, in religious countries
such
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as UAE and USA,
euthanasia
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is strongly restricted clinical treatment method as is it inhuman. Human being and their
life
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i
s
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are
the highest p
rior
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priority
blessing on the Earth by God,
hence
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the government s
pend
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spends
millions of dollars on curing.
Life
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is the most valuable gift in comparison with any lucrative items. Only God can take the
life
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of humankind. After having discussed the most pertinent points of the issue, I, personally, advocate the former view and agree with a notion that
mercy
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killing can be legalized so that we can reduce emotional and financial loss of patients and their families.
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, strict measures taken by the government can prevent the misuse of
euthanasia
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.
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