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Write about the following topic. The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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There is no doubt that the
internet
 has influenced our lives in various ways. I personally believe that our access to information has been significantly increased because of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
.
Firstly
, the
internet
 has revolutionised the way we communicate.
This
 is because of different applications that have been developed to make the virtual communication seamless, no mater how far apart people are. Some can sit in one part of the world and still be aware of what is happening in their loved one's daily life in another part of the world through different applications,
for instance
 Facebook and Instagaram.
Also
, the personal or professional communication can be done through different video, audio video conferencing applications like Whatsapp, Skype, zoom without feeling the distance.
Furthermore
, it definitely helps people have faster access to the news and to know what happen around the world as it happens.
This
 can be useful in many ways to reach to the large number of people, especially during health crisis. One of the prominent examples of the importance of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 was observed during latest Covid-19 pandemic outbreak and it showed how the
internet
 could be used to educate people around the globe about these kinds of crisis.
However
, there are a great number of misleading, false or fake information online and one should not solely rely on the
internet
 without proper investigation on his/her own. In conclusion, I affirm how
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 has widened our reach to access to information, and impacted our lives in the way we virtually interact with each other and the way we obtain the latest news on the global landscape.
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