Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that
food
should be produced for all people by the government and less amount should be imported if possible. In my opinion, I agree that
countries
can produce
food
themselves.
However
, there are some reasons that make it impossible
such
as geographical position and weather
condition
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.For a start,
government
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can prepare many necessary
productions
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like
food
for their population as they quite have enough money.
For instance
, every year they dedicate specific money
for
this
reason. By doing
this
, they can be able to deal with
this
issue.
Besides
,
this
would enable them to be more independent of other
countries
.
As a result
, every country is responsible for resolving people’s
need
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.
However
, some
countries
have to import their essential
food
from foreign
countries
. For example,
although
Iran is blessed with a variety of fertile lands and has a wide range of products, it cannot produce many
productions
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like wheat, rice and
also
some fruits. A number of reasons have been put forward for
this
, but by far the most important could be the location and climate
condition
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. Some areas are too hot or cold,
thus
many productions cannot rise well, or others need special conditions example soil and height.
Consequently
, they have to purchase them from other
countries
. In conclusion, though every country should supply needful things for
whole
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population, some reasons like their location and weather prevent them from producing their necessities independently.

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