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With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life.is it important to keep our traditional ways of life? How can this be achieved?

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In
this
 day and age, technology has brought significant change in human lives.The advent of modern community, masses is leaving traditional ways of living.So, I intend to explore the importance of traditional ways of
life
 along with it can be obtained and maintain with few essential steps. To regard with the value of traditional way.
Firstly
, it is true that our ancestors gave us a very beautiful
life
.Traditional ways of
life
 are playing very crucial role in order to meet us history
life
 struggle which our ancestors faced and endured.
Therefore
, human beings can learn many things which act as improving way of living as well as avoid to make mistakes.
Moreover
,
this
 era was very different as compared to the past and all invention has been invented in a few decades ago and coming in
this
 era.So,
thus
, individuals should not forget vital things which they brought from the past.
As a result
, new generation should get knowledge of these goods. Moving
further
 in the favours of some effective measure in term of obtaining traditional values.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 of all, the government should make obligations regarding maintaining traditional buildings and provide funding for repairing it, if it's damaged from natural disasters.
Further point
Suggestion
The further point
 is that the state should make the essential subject in school and teachers should provide historical tours in result of socializing with past goods as well as always share thoughts which is related to past struggle and so on.
Last
 but least, media should broadcast history, related news and movies which aid as enhance general knowledge. In conclusion, traditional ways of living have fruitful benefits due to modernization, it may become demoralized
however due
Accept comma addition
however, due
 to positive actions it can be saved.
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