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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In some countries, many people are suffering from
health
 issues due to excessive consumption of junk
food
. The view of some people is that
government
Suggestion
the government
 should increase
tha
definite article
the
 taxes on
this
food
. I totally disagree with the statement and I will justify my point in the following paragraphs. The main reason for consuming junk
food
 is easily available at the every corner of the street
food
 and
also
 an affordable at low cost. To make it more clear, people are very busy with their work schedule so they do not have much time for making
food
 in less time for them.
As a result
, they are completely depending on street
food
 which are
in
Suggestion
on
low budget
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a low budget
 and
convenient
Suggestion
convenience
.
For instance
, The Times of India reported in March 2018, the majority of the people are eating too much fast
food
 due to that they are suffering from many
health
 issues
such
 as diabetes, hypertension, heart disease and obesity.
On the other hand
, many people are
affecting
Suggestion
affected
 from
health
 issues by consuming fast
food
.
However
,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
 should
banned
Suggestion
ban
such
 products which are afflicting on people's
health
. To explain it
further
,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
 should advert
such
 type of cuisines which are harmful and educate the individuals to consume less
such
 kind of foods.
Besides
, Middle class people are more affected with increasing the tax on
this
items
Suggestion
item
. Imposing a higher tax will not eradicate to consume junk
food
.
For example
, Indian Government has recently issued a law, which is a compulsory sticker on fast
food
 products which gives information about their ingredients. To conclude, Imposing a higher tax on fast
food
 is not a good decision as it will be
affect
Suggestion
affected
 to poor people.
In contrast
, Governments should use the effective sources rather than increasing taxes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overconsumption
  • Chronic diseases
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Cardiovascular health
  • Sin tax
  • Subsidize
  • Affordability
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Paternalism
  • Socio-economic disparities
  • Industry lobbying
  • Public health initiatives
  • Consumer behavior
  • Regulatory measures
  • Health-conscious
  • Processed foods
  • Fiscal policy
  • Preventative healthcare
  • Behavioral economics
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