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advantages and disadvantages living in small community

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The pros and cons of living in small communities depend on your personality. Living in a small country had a lot advantages and disadvantages. I assume the
first
 among other benefits was to live healthy. The air conditions were quality as there was no air pollution so depend on bad conditions diseases were less.
Low
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Lower
 stress level was another gain for healthy life.
Secondly
, the low cost of living was the advantages of urban areas. Rental fees and grocery
costs reduced
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costs, reduced
 less your budget so
this
 situation provided an opportunity to
spent
Suggestion
spend
 other needs.
Thirdly
, persons living in small communities were helpful and supportive so they helped to you for all things.
For example
, you needed a lot of money for your child spending, they lent money easily. I think on the negative side, rural areas were often poor and
lack
 health services, employment opportunities, and entertainment activities. There were
lack
 of health services because rural
areas’
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area’s
 population were fewer, so governments didn’t build hospitals or health complexes.
Therefore
, the number of unemployed people was high, there had fewer job opportunities, so
lack
 of money trouble started on communities that weren’t too big. They wanted to enjoy in spare time but
lack
 of entertainment venues didn’t offer them, so most of people were bored and unhappy. Limited options for fun
such
 as theatre, cinema, and swimming pool affected badly social development of children living there. In my opinion, the disadvantages of living in rural areas were more than advantages. Living healthy was
excellent but
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excellent, but
 that wasn't more important than a good education. I didn’t want to live in a small community while I knew these disadvantages.
Burhan
 AKYÜZ 30.04.2020-00:53
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