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The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,
both
education
 and
experience
 are regarded as useful for success
,
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,
 some people say that
education
 is much better than
experience
, while others think that
experience
 is much more useful,
thus
 many people have different ideologies concerning the matter of jobs for younger students. So
thus
 these
both
 views will now be discussed.
Firstly
, let's speak about academic
education
. Almost eighty percent of the people believe that
education
 is needed to pursue a good career, and
thus
 the result of many youngsters
are
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is
 given academic
education
, be it at home or school.
Education
 is said to be the source of power; if a person has
good
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a good education
education
 and is very literate,
then
 wealth and respect
is
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have been
are being
 always there for him. ‘Knowledge is power’, is a very famous quote, it is easily understandable, it means that
education
 and literacy
always gives
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always give
 you wealth and respect. So
thus
education
 is very useful and so it promises a very successful life.
Then
 comes the argument of
experience
, again
experience
 is
also
 a very useful thing, which is seen and
countedamong
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counted among
 employers. The jobs which offer the most require, usually, a minimum of at least 4-8 years
experience
, so
thus
 many youngsters and teenagers are given the
experience
 of work, so that later on they
don'thave
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don't have
 trouble in seeking jobs, later. So normally
experience
 too gives aid for people who need a job, and makes a good combination with
education
.
Lastly I
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Lastly, I
 would just like to say that
both
education
 and
both
experience
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experiences
 are good and useful in their own way, and our not better than each other, they are equally good, and make an extremely useful combination.
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