Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this ?

I think it is important to keep my
house
and
workplace
tidy and clean with all things managed and in the correct situation. Why is
this
? My home must be tidy to keep my families safe. If my home is tidy and electricity lines and toys and shoes and books are organised and in the correct place no one is going to fall over and damage to their body. One day my friend Mohsin walked into his home to answer a person that comes to his
house
door. He looked at the door. He didn't look at the floor and he falls over one shoe and
then
he went to the hospital to have his head swam.
Furthermore
, if people arrive and my
house
is non-tidy,
then
I can suffer embarrassed. My family and my friends like to see my
house
tidy and clean. I like in my
house
clean. My
workplace
must be tidy so everything is organised. If my
workplace
is organised I think I can do more
work
. I can do
this
work
because all my time is for my
work
. Sometimes I go to
work
and all my time I have to spend looking for my
work
. My desk is dirty and paper is all over the top and my time is taken by looking for what I want to do and what I need to do.
This
is so terrible and now I think it is important to keep my
workplace
managed and all things in the correct situation.
Also
, if I need to find pens or pencils it is easy when organised. To conclude, in a nutshell, keep
house
and
workplace
tidy is a good thing because I can find my things, my family like it, it is safe.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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