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A healthy and balanced society requires a symbiotic relationship between citizens and the
government
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. The
government
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looks after citizens from the taxes it collects.
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, a pertinent question is often asked- who should pay which taxes, and should
one
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be required to pay taxes for services he does not avail of.
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, how fair is it to require citizens to pay taxes for
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government
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government, education
education
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, when their children do not avail of these facilities and actually attend private school? After all there in no denying the fact that parents sending their children to private schools are anyway burdened with the higher fees they charge. As these schools have their own stipulations for uniform, books and activities, the cost of attendance to these schools is radically higher than their
government
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counterpart. In effect, asking
such
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parents to pay taxes for universal
education
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is like making someone
pays
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pay
to construct a park he never visits.
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,
one
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does not need to go very far to see that
this
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argument
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does not hold water.
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, when
one
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pays taxes,
one
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is not directly paying for services he or she uses. The
government
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collects taxes from various sources
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and then decides
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decides in which area to spend the money and who its beneficiaries will be.
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, the
government
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may
tax
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a rich hotel or an entrepreneur to fun supply of water to a village.
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,
this
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very same person may be using a disproportionate amount of
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
other
government
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service for which he pays less
tax
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.
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, he may be using more of the road than another person, but paying the same
tax
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.
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,
basic nature
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the basic nature
of the taxation system flies in the face of
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argument
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. The ethical angle of the
argument
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proposed must
also
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be considered. A person whose family does not take the benefit of universal
education
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may be rich enough to send his children to a costlier private school. The very idea of taxation is to have a more egalitarian society, which is achieved by taxing the rich and serving the poor. The
argument
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may be made for the old and the retired people, who do not avail of universal
education
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.
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,
one
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must remember that governments around the world are careful to impose less taxes on
such
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people anyway.
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,
such
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people may be paying less or no income
tax
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. Specifically targeting
taxes which
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taxes, which
finance
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finance, government
government
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school appears, not only to be out of line, but
also
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un-ethical.
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