More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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It is true that people prefer to exchange information through computers now. Some people argued that printed books, magazines and newspaper should be replaced by electric devices. I completely disagree with

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idea.

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of all, there are still many people can’t use int

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the internet

access information. Some people are not educated on how to use electronic devices.

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, many elderly people are not familiar with phones and computers. They are always confused by so many functions in electronic devices. As they are used to reading pri

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oducts, they still need newspapers and magazines. And

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not all people can afford the high price of electric devices.

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, some people lived in a place where cannot connect in

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ternet, they still rely on newspapers.

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, printed books are less likely cause eye strain. It is healthier when people need to read for long hours, which helps them cultivate a habit of deep reading. If all printed products are replaced, people will inevitably watch the screen of electronic devices for a long time, which may damage their eyes.

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, there are a lot of fake news and articles posted online as everyone can post art

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articles

line.

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, printed works are more reliable.

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, in cas

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newspapers, the sources of news are confirmed, people can trust it. In conclusion,

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technology is developing fast, it cannot completely replace the traditional ways of accessing news and information. Online sources may continue to grow significantly, but printed products are still widely needed in our daily life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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255 words

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Digital revolution
Immediate access
Interactive content
Multimedia elements
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Cognitive understanding
Retention
Technological dependency
Power outages
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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Fully explain your ideas

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree？

Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meet can cause health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach to teaching?

Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?

countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.