Some people think the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, humans are getting resources from the

environment

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and our life on earth basically depends on nature,

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why world environmental pollution has been a major concern. To protect the

environment

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, some individuals feel that government should raise the price of fuel. It may help to some

extent but

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extent, but

there are other pivotal factors which play the leading roles in

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problem.

To begin

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with, most of the technologies used in different industries are operated by petrol.

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, oil is

crucial part

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a crucial part

of human activities which harming the

environment

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. By increasing the price of the fuel government might reduce only cars running on the street.

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Moreover high

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Moreover, high

prised

the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)

priced

fuels would

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also incluence to the

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also influence the

also influence to the

also inclines to the

cost of products which necessary to human's daily life and it would lead to rampant inflation.

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this

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solution

can not

cannot

cease environmental hazards.

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, a better solution

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is investing

is invested

has invested

invests

is to invest

in clean energy sources like wind and solar rather than non-renewable resources like coal and petrol.

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Secondly government

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Secondly, government

should improve public transportation and invest more on repairing and constructing new roads.

This

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practice can help clean the

environment

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and might reduce usage of oil for private cars. To conclude, I strongly believe that the high-priced petrol is not the best solution to

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problem and

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will burden the fuel users who travel to enjoy their leisure time. Undoubtedly

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the growth of oil and gas prices will create new problems. And we need to do our best to stop environmental

demages

a sum of money paid in compensation for loss or injury

damages

damage

, especially for the benefit of our future generations.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

254 words

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