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Prison is the best punishment for criminals do You agree or disagree ?

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It is irrefutable that prison is the best punishment for every criminals. A certain segment of the Nation that law enforcement agencies should give a chance to change their life. While other opine that the Government should give the death sentence to criminals. I completely agree with the following statement. I would like to explicate it at length in the paragraph to come.
To Begin
 with, the
first
 and the foremost that to prevent the
crime
 Government must punish the criminal because of punishment they realise that they should not crimes.
for
Suggestion
For
 example
,
Accept space
,
this
 point we can consider that rape cases have been increased day by day all over the world because most rape cases have pending in the court In
this
 reason the criminals do not afraid the punishment and they do
crime
 again and again.
Thus
, Law enforcement agencies should give the death sentence to criminal.
Moreover
, one more convince point that cannot be ignored that the
crime
also
 bad effect to the society if the government do not punish the criminal than number of criminal will increased in society hand to hand.
For example
,
This
 point we can consider that the drug business is most effective for criminals because they sell the drug to earn high income
Hence
 death sentence is the better option for criminals. After over all the analysis, it can be concluded that
crime
 is dangerous for all over the world so legislature assembly should make the law and the court must execute the law.
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