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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The proportion of
graduates
 and postgraduates in the
UK
 who did not
work
 full-time after graduation in the
UK
 in
the
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year 2008 is illustrated in two bar charts, which share a common
in
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the
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structure. It can be clearly seen from the two charts
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that four destinations of
graduates
UK
 students excluding full-time
work
 consisting of
part-time
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 job, voluntary
work
,
further
 study and out of employment were
being
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almost ten times as much as
the
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one of university
graduates
.
In
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 the end of the decade, part-time
work
 and
further
 study were considered
as
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the most popular decisions after graduation.
However
, the number of
graduates
 continuing their
study
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 was nearly twice as much as the one who worked for a part-time job;
whereas
, the part of students who left universities was equally split into two these choices. In the same
of
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period, it is noticeable that the proportion between the unemployed and volunteers after graduation
high
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 schools and universities was approximately five times, which led
voluntary
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to voluntary
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work
 to account for a small minority in total graduate and postgraduate
UK
 students.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, uk, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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