The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The proportion of
graduates
and postgraduates in the Use synonyms
UK
who did not Use synonyms
work
full-time after graduation in the Use synonyms
UK
in Use synonyms
the
year 2008 is illustrated in two bar charts, which share a common Correct article usage
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
the
structure.
It can be clearly seen from the two charts Correct article usage
apply
is
that four destinations of Unnecessary verb
apply
graduates
Use synonyms
UK
students excluding full-time Use synonyms
work
consisting of Use synonyms
part-time
job, voluntary Add an article
a part-time
work
, Use synonyms
further
study and out of employment were Linking Words
being
almost ten times as much as Unnecessary verb
apply
the
one of university Change the article
apply
graduates
.
Use synonyms
In
the end of the decade, part-time Change the preposition
At
work
and Use synonyms
further
study were considered Linking Words
as
the most popular decisions after graduation. Change preposition
apply
However
, the number of Linking Words
graduates
continuing their Use synonyms
study
was nearly twice as much as the one who worked for a part-time job; Fix the agreement mistake
studies
whereas
, the part of students who left universities was equally split into two these choices.
In the same Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
period, it is noticeable that the proportion between the unemployed and volunteers after graduation Correct article usage
apply
high
schools and universities was approximately five times, which led Change preposition
from high
voluntary
Change preposition
to voluntary
work
to account for a small minority in total graduate and postgraduate Use synonyms
UK
students.Use synonyms
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