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Some people believe that without ethics human civilization cannot thrive. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #ethics #civilization
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Few people consider that ethics are essential for the success of human civilization. It is true that ethics play a crucial role in every
person
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's
life
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. I totally agree with
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 statement as without ethics the
life
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 has no sentiment or value. Let us discuss how the ethics are important. Ethics are pivotal in every situation of our
life
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. Every
person
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 have his own notions depend on the atmosphere of his upbringings. Ethics means the manner, moral or the decorum. Whenever we do any work like business, writing novels, creating songs or just simply doing
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quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
 housework, ethics
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play
 their role over there.
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, if a
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 doing business than he has work ethics like he has done his project with honesty, loyalty and
hardwork
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hard work
 which has not affected any of his co-workers or colleagues, it means his ethics is there. The human civilisation can develop in well manner by ethics. Every
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have
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has
 some beliefs, customs, morals in their
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, with that they can learn how to behave with
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
, how to communicate or how to get solutions of each
problems
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problem
 which might arise in their
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. Personal ethics can
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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
 cultivated, but often cannot be achieved if the
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 has no inner desire to accomplish it.
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, my friend has a dream of having her own business and she fulfilled her dream by following
ethics
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the ethics
 in her
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. To conclude, ethics are very important to develop an image of ourselves differently in front of others. It is
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 necessary to follow the decorum of our beliefs. Without ethics one cannot be a successful
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 in his
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental
  • stability
  • moral framework
  • chaos
  • breakdown of trust
  • integrity
  • fairness
  • justice
  • interpersonal relationships
  • governance
  • decision-making
  • behavior
  • well-being
  • preservation
  • sustainable development
  • harmonious
  • prosperous
  • exploitation
  • inequality
  • corruption
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • respect
  • guiding principle
  • moral choices
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