The experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In my opinion, the experts are people, who had
have
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have, such
had such
had had such
such
as an experience
from
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of
their life. But experts forgot that children might be different in characteristics, in learning
language
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a language
the language
or math, in sports.
First
of all, in
this
case, should be
divide
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divided
to children in three categories, as
government
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the government
do
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does
it. In the
first
class children who have
addiction
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addicted
to natural science as math, biology, geography. The
next
type is, who can
learning
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learn
languages without issue. In the
last
group, who can do all things together.
However
, at grade
school
children should learn in depth their
mother
tongue
. If children kit
know
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knows
mother
tongue
very well, children will learn a foreign
language
easiest
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easier
. One advantage of it, if every country
had want
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had wanted
their teenager and
school
children with high quality education and think their all aspects future, they would choose
this
way. It is
guarantee
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guaranteed
and
wisely
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wise
.
For example
, children start to learn a foreign
language
at
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in
grammar
school
with their
mother
tongue
, in their brain will have
storm
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a storm
. Children could not
ability
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able
to think and speak in one
language
clearly, and their speech will be mixed. The main disadvantage of it,
school
kit
have been learning
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has been learning
other
language
easily from elementary
school
than
mother
tongue
. It says that community, who have chosen
this
way,
their
in or at that place
there
could have a complication. Anyway, people can learn
effectively
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effective
other
language
when
their
people in general
they
want.
Therefore
,
school
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the school
schools
might not give a knowledge deeply. From my life experience, I have some friends, who learned
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
language
from primary
school
, but now they do not know nicely
language
. Of course, it can be individuals. In conclusion, the disadvantages is outweigh than
advantage
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an advantage
.

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