Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or dis agree.

Education is the rudimentary right of every
student
which decides their career. So, Universities should be conscious while taking any decision in
such
a scenario that it should enrol the equal
number
of male and female candidates in each
subject
may lead to the controversy. In
this
21st century era,
gender
appers
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
appears
no big deal anymore.
Thus in
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Thus, in
my opinion, it is no longer required
same
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the same number
number
of male and female candidates
instead
of
this
they should focus on the
subject
they want to take as per their interest. Nowadays Women can work in each and every field.
However
, There are some duties
such
as police in which male can do better than female as males are stronger, having
capability
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the capability
of
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to
run fast, and less emotional than women. On
otherside
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the other side
other side
, Females can do better work as a teacher because it is
childrens'
a young person of either sex
children
nature that they prefer to
taught
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teach
by
female
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the female
females
a female
. For an instance, If any
student
had hit his finger, female teacher will take him in her lap and do the remedy while male teacher will say do take care.
Thus
, Each
subject
is different and demanding different skills and it does not require
equal
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an equal number
number
of male and female candidates.
In addition
to that, Every
student regardless
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student, regardless
of
gender
is putting efforts to get admission in
subject
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the subject
which they find interesting and curious about. If any varsity will reject their application even though they are fulfilling the criteria except the
gender
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gender, then
then
it is not fair for them.
Besides
that, from the perspective of universities they prefer to accept admissions of the
brillient
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
students
first
. If there
is
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are
gender
criteria it
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criteria, it
might be possibility of rejecting the
brillient
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
student
. To recapitulate, I prefer that universities should
petronize
assume sponsorship of
patronize
patronise
educands
to choose the
subject
of their interest
instead
of giving importance of having
equal
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an equal number
number
of male and female.
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