In number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that this money should be spent on improving public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, technological advances are making movement a lot easier and faster.

However

, there has been a lot of contentious argument about whether nations should invest huge amount of

money

for the construction of new railway lines for fast

train

within cities or to channel these funds to making public

transport

better.

This

essay will explain both opinions as well as mine.

First

of all, the invention of fast

train

is a good development that should be embraced because of the many benefits that comes with it. Fast

train

do not only save time, but will

also

reduce road traffic accident significantly, as movement by

train

is not known to cause accidents. A recent study showed that automobile accident accounted for 20% of death annually,

hence

it is necessary to construct new railway lines so that more

train

will to available to convey people to many different cities.

Additionally

, building

train

track will open many business opportunities for people, and large amount of goods can be transported easily and faster between cities.I am of the opinion that spending a large sum of

money

on new railway lines is very necessary.

However

this

money

can be used to improve the public

transport

system because if all the attention is turned to the fast

train

, it will be difficult to meet the demand of the dense population of people. Meaning that the trains will be overwhelmed and degenerate quickly.

Moreover

, it will take some people time to embrace the change of a new means of transportation, for that reason it is important to make the public

transport

better. In conclusion, I believe that it is

essential

Suggestion

Essential

to put in a good amount of

money

to construct the new fast

train

line because of the many benefits that comes with doing so, but the public

transport

should not be neglected.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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