You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear
Mr.
Adnan,
I am writing to you to complain about the Change the punctuation
Mr
food
services
that we had received in the meeting that our company conducted in your hotel last
week. The participants
' feedback about the hotel were
good at some point, but unfortunately, the Change the verb form
was
food
services
get very poor feedback.
Let me explain in more detail, the participants
were happy about many things in the meeting, suchsuch
as the organizing of the meeting. Correct your spelling
such such
Also
, they like the meeting room which was large enough to handle the
large number of Change the article
a
participants
.
I would complain about the food
services
as there were several negative points that I received from the participants
. Firstly
, the food
that was served during the meeting was very cold. Secondly
,the quantity of the food
was not enough to cover the
large number of Change the article
a
participants
.
I think that I have several suggestions to improve the food
services
in your hotel. To begin
with, your team should consider the number of participants
of
Change preposition
in
meeting
and prepare Add an article
the meeting
the
enough amount of Remove the article
apply
food
to serve them. Moreover
, the food service
team should ensure to heat the Correct your spelling
foodservice
food
that has been prepared previously.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
Fadia Habboub.Submitted by hariharan.jacky on
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