You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Adnan, I am writing to you to complain about the

food

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services

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that we had received in the meeting that our company conducted in your hotel

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week. The

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' feedback about the hotel

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good at some point, but unfortunately, the

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get very poor feedback. Let me explain in more detail, the

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were happy about many things in the meeting,

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as the organizing of the meeting.

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, they like the meeting room which was large enough to handle

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large number of

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. I would complain about the

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as there were several negative points that I received from the

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.

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, the

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that was served during the meeting was very cold.

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,the quantity of the

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was not enough to cover

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large number of

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. I think that I have several suggestions to improve the

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in your hotel.

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with, your team should consider the number of

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of

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meeting

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and prepare

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enough amount of

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to serve them.

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, the

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food service

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team should ensure to heat the

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that has been prepared previously. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. Fadia Habboub.