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Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?

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It is believed by a few individuals that, children
also
 teach about the grow
food
 and cooking in their school classes like other subjects. I profoundly agree with the statement, that It’s good a thought children should learn about grow
food
 and cooking with them self as its change of point of view.
To begin
 with the given statement, children are more renovated and ready to learn the new things in a life and its plays major role in a life, because it’s child became independent. Growing
food
 and preparing delicious
food
 is an art and every child must try
this
. It’s not that cooking has no future, there are many TV shows running a competition on cooking
for example
 little master chef or many others and they have a bright future in the same field as well, even though nowadays there are many professional institutes, those running diploma and degree planting
food
 and cooking.
As a result
, studies start learning the growing
food
 and leaning cooking, they would be taking more interest with family cooking, especially mother would be happiest as children will help them for cooking with new ideas and encourage others to take part in the same. By making
food
 at home, they would not go out for fast
food
 and healthy snack. Children
also
 learn about the nutritional value in the
food
 and their mindset would be a change of eating habits. To conclude
this
, growing
food
 and teaching cooking at the school level is a good thought and school must consider
this
 platform for studies and initiate the particular classes in same esteem and
this
 will make a different society in our community.
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