Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country. To what extent do u you agree or disagree?

A common trend in recent times is

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government

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the government

giving

helping hand

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a helping hand

to other countries in need. Some people are of the opinion that the

government

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should not do

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, but should channel their resources to help challenged individuals in their country live a better life. I strongly believe that there is so much our leaders can do to alleviate suffering and poverty in the nation

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,

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should be their prime focus rather than giving out help.

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many people all over the world are groaning under intense hardship and stress due to lack of help and limited resources at their disposal. It is the responsibility of the

government

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to make life better for its masses

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One reason why

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is encouraged is because it will help reduce the mortality and morbidity of a nation.

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instance one

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instance, one

major cause of sickness and death is poor nutrition arising from unemployment

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poverty and stress

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menance

something that is a source of danger

menace

means

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can be well handled by the

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rather than giving out aid to better the lot of other countries.

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, in most of our developing countries, increasing

crime

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rate is becoming an issue of concern as the figures are sky rocking by the day. If the

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focus on helping individuals with peculiar challenges not only will it bring down

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negative trend

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the country will be safer to dwell in. People now live in fear in most homes because of the uncertainty of their safety

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lots

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of unemployed youth on the street have been cajoled into

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in a bid to source for means of survival.

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a regular TV presenter interviewed some criminals awaiting execution, many complained amidst tears that hunger drove them to the streets

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as they had no primary

intension

an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions

intention

to go into

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Government

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intervention can bring a positive

turn around

time need to prepare a vessel or ship for a return trip

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. In conclusion, many people think that

government

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should not render help to other

countries but

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countries, but

should channel their resources in helping displaced, handicapped and challenged individuals around them. I strongly agree to

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as

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will not only reduce mortality and morbidity rates, it will

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reduce

crime

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rate and make our nation safe again.