You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Dear Raman, I hope you're feeling well
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and I am sure you are getting
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best treatment from the hospital and will be totally fine after a few days. I am writing
this
letter in regards to telling you about the
match
which our team played on the weekend without you. I am feeling very pleased to tell you that we won the
match
.    On the day of
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the match
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"team blues" was
in
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the opposite of our team. Blues won the toss and decides to start batting. They lose their 2 best players in the very
first
over. They played very well, but as we practice very hard, we won the
match
without losing our all
player
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.     We all were very happy
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the
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but we still felt very bad for you that you were not with us. I hope you will
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fine
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very soon and start playing with us as normally you play. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.   Thank you,     Aman

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