The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for the many countries. Some people feel that one way to limt the number of people traveling by air is to increase tax on flights

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With the advancement of technology,
air
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travel
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has been introduced for the comfort of people, it is a very convenient mode of
transportation
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but increasing demand for f
lights is having a
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transportation, but
serious impact on environment and it is a major issue for ma
ny nations.
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the environment
Some individuals feel that rise in tax on
air
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travelling is best solution to reduce the number of pass
engers. But I
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the best solution
am in favour
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statement, and many other solutions to
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problem
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will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
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the upcoming paragraphs
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with, increasing the tax on flights is one of the effective way to curb
this
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problem
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. But nowadays,
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ways
travel
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is very expensive
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of other
transportation
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modes. Everyone cannot afford it, only rich people who belong to high community can
travel
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from one place to other using airways. So if the government
incre
any of various alternatives; some other
another
ases the rates of tickets
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it may drastically affect low
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tickets, then
amilies as well as students. It w
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an effect
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community, but
er of passengers who belong to medicore families.
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, there are various others solutions which can be helpful in declining the
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of passengers using the
air
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travel
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.
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, the infrastructure of roads should be constructed beterr along side it, public transport sho
uld be
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better
improved with good facilities so it will lead to people traveling by public
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.
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stance, t
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
rain is very cheap and convenient mode of
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the train
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than others. It
also
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helps to save time, traveller's can carry luggage as much as possible. In japan bullet train is connected with entire nation in order to increase the eco
nomic growth
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an entire nation
the entire nation
and development,it can easily carry thousands of passenge
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,
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, by using the public
transportation
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the
problem
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of pollution can be reduced because a large amount of fossil fuels is utilized by
air
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travelling rather than public transport. To conclude, it is clear from aforementioned paragraphs that the more usage of
air
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travel
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has become a big issue for environment but if government implements s
ome measures
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the environment, but
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the government
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can be solved.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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