The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The chart presented the number of journeys

with

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by

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car

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the car

a car

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into the

city

centre by

residents

and

non-

residents

between 1996 to 2005.

Overall

,

this

graph shows

residents

and

non-

residents

decreased

go

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going

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into the

city

by

car

year to year.

For example

, Ten thousand

residents

by

car

journey into the

city

in 1996,

over

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and over

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4000

residents

went into the

city

by

car

in 2004. Between 1999 to 2002, more than 8,000

non-

residents

stably travelled into the

city

by

car

,

whereas

this

number got the lowest point is 3000 to 4000

residents

. We can see

residents

actively travelled into the

city

by

car

from 1996 to 1999,

however

from 2000

that’s

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that

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number sharply declined.The data clearly show both

residents

and

non-

residents

went into the

city

approximately 4000

a

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apply

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per day for three years.